Sunday, March 27, 2011

Digital Pitch - basic design

This is a basic design of the drawn version of my pitch, the next step is to improve it using Illustrator 

3 comments:

  1. Hi Harry.It's a good concept and is looking good already.Maybe experiment with colors and backgrounds to enhance the aesthetics.It can be a daunting task when the design parameters are infinite.I had that problem with themes.But sometimes it's good to just set aside time to mix it up,like brainstorming.
    Whenever I see a stick of gum...the first impulse I feel is that I want it.I wanna chew it up.I was thinking maybe you could layer the "Extra" title over a photoreal extra stick of gum,on a background that compliments the gum ...with the green title color a lighter fluorescent green.Like the green of my ancient Greek helmet logo on my blog.
    Make the most out of page space,so as to have more space to make the "Advantages of the Tin" points larger.These are just some things I though I'd cover to help the process.I hope it helps dude.Looking very good so far.

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  2. thanks man, I'm going to try out that stick of gum idea. I'll take a photo and make something up soon and post it up on my blog. keep it coming to haha

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  3. hey harry, looks good mate. only thing i'd say is to..maybe make the background a colour or shade perhaps..??? but looks all good to me...jake

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