After looking at the design of my pitch on both computer and drawn I've come up with a few things I think need to be changed
- Less white space, I think the blank parts make it boring so I'm thinking about a background colour
- I need to demonstrate the old and new packaging in more detail
- I also think more text and content will help fill the page up more and make it more effective as well as pleasing to look at.
My control group is Phil, Laura and Robert.
If anyone has any tips feel free to get them to me how ever you can =)
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